The last slide the reader sees. Treat it as a single design moment — not a recap, not a thank-you, not a next-steps list. One ask, one slide.
See
storytelling/closing-ask.mdfor the rhetorical logic and the 4 ask types. This file covers the physical slide build.
The default layout
┌─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┐
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│ Vote the GOLD proxy card to elect │
│ all seven of our nominees at the │
│ July 15, 2024 Annual Meeting. │
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│ ── The Committee for a Stronger Phillips 66 │
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│ www.streamline66.com │
│ info@streamline66.com │
│ │
└─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┘
Specifications
- Background: dark (charcoal #15171A or near-black #0A0A0B). The rest of the deck is typically on white/cream — the dark background signals "we have arrived".
- Ask type: 32–44pt serif, italic if you want literary weight, regular otherwise. Centred or left-aligned to a 70% column.
- Attribution line: 14pt sans, prefixed with em-dash. Identifies the author of the ask (the campaign committee or fund).
- Contact info: 12pt mono, low opacity (60%). Exactly two lines: a microsite URL + a campaign email address.
- No page number, no footer, no nav — this slide is the terminus.
The four type-specific layouts
Type 1 · Vote (proxy)
Vote the GOLD proxy card to elect
Hunter Harrison, Paul Hilal, Stephen Tobias,
and four other nominees at the
May 17, 2012 Annual Meeting.
Must include:
- Card colour (typically GOLD for activist; WHITE for management; BLUE often used by management defending against activists)
- The exact slate names
- Meeting date (with day, month, year)
- Implicit instruction to use the activist proxy card
Type 2 · Commit
We urge the Board to commit, by the
Q3 2024 earnings release, to separating
the Midstream business into a standalone
REIT within 24 months.
Must include:
- Specific action ("separate", "approve", "engage")
- Deadline for the commitment
- Implementation window for the action itself
Type 3 · Transact
The Board should launch a formal
strategic review with the mandate to
consider all transactional alternatives,
including a sale of the Company,
with findings due December 31, 2024.
Type 4 · Vindicate (short-seller)
Our estimate of Nikola's intrinsic
equity value is zero.
We are short the stock and anticipate
SEC action within 90 days.
Different visual register: often white text on red or warning-orange background. Stark, declarative.
What goes immediately after the closing-ask slide
Nothing visible to the reader during normal viewing.
In the appendix-laden form (most decks):
- Methodology pages
- Source citations
- Director nominee biographies
- Defensive disclosures (firm history, fund standing, voting record)
- Legal disclaimers
Always restart page numbering or use roman numerals (i, ii, iii) for appendix to signal the deck proper has ended.
Common mistakes
- Multiple asks on the closing slide. "Vote our slate AND commit to spin AND announce strategic review" — the power is singular. Pick one. The others belong in the Answer section.
- Soft verbs. "Consider", "evaluate", "explore", "review" — all defensible to ignore. Use "vote", "commit", "elect", "approve", "launch".
- Hidden ask in a summary slide. A 5-point summary slide with the ask buried as point 4 dilutes it. The ask deserves its own visual moment.
- Wrong card colour. Each fund/contest has a colour convention. Verify with proxy counsel; using the wrong card colour invalidates shareholder votes.
- No microsite. "info@example.com" alone forces interested shareholders into one-on-one outreach. A microsite multiplies reach by 100×.
- Page numbering continues. If the reader sees "page 73 of 147", they don't know it's the end. Either no page number or "// END //" marker.
Exemplars
- Pershing Square · Canadian Pacific (Feb 2012) — vote-the-GOLD closing ask; won 6/7 seats
- Starboard · Darden (Sep 2014) — vote-the-WHITE closing ask; won full slate
- Trian · Disney "Restore the Magic" (Mar 2024) — vote-the-WHITE
with
restorethemagic.commicrosite; lost - Elliott · Southwest "Stronger Southwest" (Sep 2024) — vote ask → settlement
- Hindenburg · Nikola (Sep 2020) — Type 4 vindicate; intrinsic-zero declaration
- Muddy Waters · Luckin Coffee (Jan 2020) — Type 4 with explicit catalyst forecast (delisting)
See also
storytelling/closing-ask.md— the strategic logic and 4 typescampaigns/proxy-fight.md— where Type 1 fits in the contestslides/cover-slide.md— the bookend (cover ↔ closing ask)slides/visual-craft.md— colour discipline (dark background usage)